Friday, December 26, 2008

TICK TICK THOUGHTS !

Read the poem till the end if you want to find out why I wrote it !

Two thin hands move towards the future
While the big one leads, the little one follows;
Where one hand goes, the other not knows,
Still once in a while, they meet for sure.

Twelve little men spread out in a circle,
Mere Bystanders are they? “No no”, they say;
They seem to work all night and day,
With a message to pass, no man an obstacle.

One round face at me, to blink,
Transparent enough to express all it has;
One tiny fellow not to be seen alas!
Though hidden behind, he makes them all tick!

My precious dear watch, where did u go?
Not only the slipping time did you faithfully show,
Each of your inmates had something in life to teach;
I pray with hope you are nowhere beyond reach !

8 comments:

Anonymous said...

Author s asked to describe the situation (of loosing watch) :-)
when and how?? LOL. Keep posting:-)

Anonymous said...

hey this poem is very nice!!!!
keep rocking!!!!
All the best!!!!

Twinkle said...

@muks.....Thank you :)

Twinkle said...

@Common Man.....I do not know when or where i lost it :(

Anonymous said...

So this an imagination over an imaginary watch lost in that imagination huh? Good imagination. i am trying to imagine how u imagined.

vignesh said...

Thats a Cute poem abt a watch:)!

Twinkle said...

@vignesh......thank you :)

NAS said...

one of the best poems i have read... WONDERFUL.. SUPERB