Sunday, November 30, 2008

SHINING BEAUTY

The moon has always remained an object of fascination ! It stands as a symbol for purity, love and wonder. Am one among the countless fans who are attracted to this awesome heavenly body. So,being an amateur poet, i tried to compare the moon with humans and found that man has a lot to learn from this shining beauty hanging around planet earth !

Moon, Oh Moon ! You shine so bright ,
In the darkness of the night.
Are you beside this wonderful earth,
Since the day of your birth ?

Who taught you to fly without a wing?
And to change your round into a ring?
All on earth that is beautiful and nice,
You are always there to symbolize !

The silent night you slowly steal;
To return it by day break for a deal?
You shine so well with all your might,
To lighten a planet twice your size !

Oh ! Altar of heaven, ruling the sky !
To show your darker face, are you shy?
Fly down once so as to witness,
The mask of man to hide his dirty darkness !

8 comments:

pappu said...

Kudos !!! hey nice post

boobu said...

welcome to blogging chombu... roll on

sathukudi said...

really really awesome work.. i had a smile when i went through this... and i loved the third stanza.... u shud have started blogging way before.. anywayz gr8 start and keep them coming..

remove this word verification.. i am sick of that...

putchutney said...

Nice one !!! Btw check out Bruce almighty and u would know what happens when moon comes down .... :-D

echo on satz's word verification thingie !!!

Anonymous said...

wow!! A great start!! keep rocking!! All the best!! :)

Twinkle said...

@ everyone ......THANK YOU :)

aishu said...

awesome gd.....kudos....keep up the good work......expecting more posts from u..in the near future......keep me updated.....if any.......

Rohini said...

hii twinkle,,

great to see ur blog dear..its awesome..nice template too...hey and this is one of my fav poem in ur ever ending list,,superb buddy..:):) keep rocking..:) cheers..!!!